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Friday Fiction: The Foreign Language of Friends, Ch. 3

September 30, 2011 by admin

Book Baby has The Foreign Language of Friends! In a few days I should have some cover proofs to look over. In the meantime, here’s chapter three where the four main characters meet for the first time.

 

CHAPTER 3 – JUNE 20

Rita Martin stood at the front of her classroom, a broad smile on her face, waiting for her new students to arrive. Despite having taught for twenty years, she always felt butterflies of excitement whenever a new session started. The material in Spanish I was always the same, but each new group of students gave the lessons a fresh perspective. Short and plump, with porcelain skin and warm brown eyes that misted easily, she dressed simply in tan slacks and a black sweater that would keep her comfortable in the air conditioning, which tended to be excessive. A hundred degrees outside, she thought, but in here they could hang meat. She rubbed her chilled hands together and hoped for a good turnout to warm the room. Plenty of students had enrolled, but she never knew who would actually show up. Learning a new language scared people, although their usual excuse for quitting was something like a more polished version of “my dog ate my homework.”

Students started to filter in at the last minute. Continuing education classes attracted a wide range of ages, backgrounds, and reasons for taking the course. She greeted each student with a hearty, “¡Hola!” which brought nods and nervous giggles in response.

She had just opened her book to begin when Julia rushed in, her face flushed from hurrying. “I’m so sorry I’m late,” she said. Glancing around at the group, she smiled brightly and said, “Hi, everyone! I’m Julia Lafferty. Won’t this be fun?”

The class chuckled collectively as Julia took a seat in the front row.

“We were just getting started,” Rita said. “Let’s get to know each other a little bit first. We’ll spend the first bit of class speaking in English, so everyone can relax.” She saw bodies unclenching and smiles that were more genuine. If she had learned nothing over the past few decades, she had at least learned how to put students at ease. “Julia, would you like to tell us a little something about yourself?”

“Great, sure,” Julia said. Swiveling around to face the class, she said, “My husband and I travel a lot, and I thought learning a language would help me communicate with the locals. Plus, I just like to meet new people.” She opened her mouth to say more, and then seemed to think better of it. “That’s all. I’m glad to be here.”

Rita laughed with the rest of the class at Julia’s infectious warmth. “Perfect,” Rita said. “Whenever you’re visiting Central or South America, people will appreciate your efforts. Some pronunciation and grammar varies if you go to Spain, but we will cover that as we go. Who’s next?”

A woman to Julia’s right cleared her throat with a “let’s get on with this” tone. “I’m Claire Malone, and I’m a corporate attorney,” she said. “My company plans to do more work in Central America, so I need to learn the language for business. I’m ready to get done with these introductions and actually learn something.” She flashed a smile that looked more like bared teeth. Rita had watched Claire enter the room like a Category 3 hurricane, commanding the attention of everyone present. Each move deliberate and forceful, she had brought out multiple notebooks, pens, and highlighters, and had already marked several pages of text with sticky notes.

“Don’t worry,” Rita said. “By the end of this class you will be surprised at what you have learned. We have many professionals who do well by taking this class. Who else?”

“I’m Ellen Foster,” said a soft, timid voice from the back of the room. She came across as a mass of brown: mousy brown hair, brown eyes, brown clothes, an ordinary-looking woman who people would pass on the street. “I’m a freelance technical writer. I’m just curious about whether I can learn a language. I think it would be good for me. You know, I’m not getting any younger, and I hear that studying a language prevents Alzheimer’s.”

The group laughed, with the exception of Claire, who had her eye on her BlackBerry, and Julia, who studied Ellen thoughtfully.

Noticing Ellen’s blush, Rita responded gently. “This may be true. Although some doctors say we can’t do anything to prevent dementia, exercise for the brain is just as important as exercising the body. And, as we get older, learning a language, while certainly possible, becomes more difficult. As we exercise the parts of our brains that we haven’t used since childhood, we may notice a sharpening of our minds in other areas. It’s a great reason to be here. Welcome.”

Ellen’s skin returned to its natural, bland color, and she smiled, though she still seemed uncertain.

“I’m Mikhela, Mickey for short, Watson — er, no, Thomas, it’s Thomas now,” said Mickey, her dark eyes darting as she clicked her pen, nerves bouncing out of her skin. “I like to run. I work in a medical office, but I might be going to grad school soon. I just got back from a volunteer trip to Costa Rica, and it was awful. I mean, the trip was cool, but I didn’t know any Spanish, so I couldn’t talk to anyone. No one spoke English at my placement. No one! Oh, and I just got married.” She carelessly flashed a modest wedding band, showing a curious lack of enthusiasm. “I’m not really good with languages, but my mom thought it would be a good class for me to take.” She dropped her eyes, still fidgeting in her seat.

“Well, congratulations!” Rita said. “A newlywed in our midst. We would love to hear more about your trip as we go on. Volunteering is a great way to get to know a place more intimately, and the language lessons will certainly help.”

Others introduced themselves, all earnest, inquiring, and nervous in their own ways. Rita offered a comment in response to each, and then explained how the class would work. She held up the textbook. “This is the book you’ll be using. I know most of you have it already, but those who don’t, make friends with a neighbor who does. Oh, by the way, I find that class works better when we’re in a circle so we can see and speak to one another. So, if you don’t mind, please move your desks into a circle.” She could see doubt and fear arising again, especially from the students who had grabbed seats along the back wall. Inside, she chuckled that adults still managed to hold on to old grade-school behaviors. She clapped her hands lightly and, in a teasing voice, said, “Ahora, por favor. That means ‘now, please.’”

Julia jumped up and moved her chair first, then went back to Ellen. “Sit next to me,” she said. “Here, I’ll help.”

The rest of the class followed reluctantly after Julia led the way.

“Great,” Rita said. “Now, we’re going to learn how to introduce ourselves, only this time in Spanish.”

By the end of the evening, everyone had learned the basics, though some fumbled more than others. Rita had passed around a sign-up sheet and noticed that Julia had copied down several e-mail addresses as the sheet came her way. Every class had its organizers, and she suspected that Julia planned to form a study group.

As she drove home from class, reflecting, she thought about past classes she had taught. Each person came to class for a particular reason, but they often left gaining something unexpected. People’s lives changed in class if they stayed with the study long enough. Those who made it to the advanced classes often traveled together, or ate at local Tex-Mex restaurants where they could practice with one another. Romances blossomed, people found new and better jobs, the list was endless. She wondered what life had in store for this class.

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Friday Fiction: The Foreign Language of Friends, Ch. 2

September 23, 2011 by admin

In this chapter, we meet one of the main characters, Julia Lafferty. Have a great weekend, everyone!

 

CHAPTER TWO – JUNE 1

Julia tossed her keys into the basket she kept next to the front door so as not to lose them, a trick she had learned years ago. Well, that was the hope anyway, although they still managed to show up in the oddest places: in laundry askets of clean clothes, on the back of a toilet, or even the refrigerator.

She felt invigorated after a quick match at the tennis club. The activity gave her sun-kissed face a warm glow and brightened her eyes. Although in her late forties, she still turned heads and enjoyed the fact that she did. Periodically, Julia used a touch of Botox® around the forehead and eyes, “just to freshen up a bit.” Where was the harm in a little nip and tuck from time to time? After all, looking young helps one to feel young. She hadn’t gone under the knife yet, but “the girls” might need a little lifting soon.

The phone rang. She dropped her Burberry metallic leather bag, overflowing with everything she needed and many items she didn’t, with a thud onto the kitchen counter, and grabbed the phone. Glancing at the caller ID, she said, “Hi, Lisa, how are you? Hey, sure, I just got back. How about tomorrow, ten o’clock? Then we can have lunch at the club. I think a martini is calling my name. Sound good? Great, see you then. Bye.”  

With tanned hands and manicured fingernails she grabbed the mail, and sat on the patio where she could enjoy the garden. Rows of white, pink, and fuchsia rose blossoms filled the yard with whimsical color and soft scents. A team of landscapers kept the lawn and gardens in symmetrical perfection. A ceiling fan that resembled palm fronds circled lazily above.

Julia had always planned to care for the flowers herself, but her husband Larry just laughed at her. “Don’t ruin those pretty hands,” he said. Sometimes she ignored him and worked in the dirt anyway, happy as a child making mud pies. He was gone so much anyway, he didn’t have to know.

As usual, most of the mail was junk. A few political ads set her teeth on edge, because that signaled the coming influx of annoying robo-calls, trying to get her vote. She put the grocery ads aside, not that she ever actually looked at them, but she always meant to. She tore the credit card solicitations in two, and set aside Larry’s mail.

She almost discarded the flyer for continuing education at Houston Community College, but she found herself holding on to it, unable to let go. “Hmm,” she said aloud. Feelings of excitement mixed with self-doubt crept in. She had never been a great student, not because of a lack of intelligence, but more because she had a social life to maintain.

Still, recently she had thought about wanting “more,” though the desire had remained, to date, a vague, amorphous feeling. She already had so much, she couldn’t imagine what that meant, but it nagged her anyway. She leafed through the brochure as though looking for clues. Religions of the World? Nah, too heavy. Starting Your Own Business? She thought about that one for a moment, then shook her head. She knew entrepreneurs who poured all their energies into getting a business up and running. Worse than a job.

“What are you looking at so intently?”

Julia jumped. “Larry!” she cried with delighted surprise. “What are you doing home?”

He leaned over and gave her a lingering kiss, which she returned eagerly. After nearly thirty years together, his lips still set off electric shivers in her body.

“Packing. I’m off to Paris again. Want to go?”

“Hmm, sounds tempting. How long will you be gone this time?”

“Not long. I’m sure not more than a week or two.”

She laughed. “As great as that sounds, not really.” For years she had jumped at all their impromptu trips, especially to Paris.

“You’re not worrying about the Parisian women again, are you?” he asked. “Because there’s plenty of great shopping there, at least so I’ve heard.”

“Ah, oui, oui, mon mari,” she said in her best French accent, complete with the remains of an East Texas twang. She had once shared with Larry that she felt inferior to Parisian women, who all seemed to exude slim magic and sensual mystery. He insisted that he found the women to be overly consumed with their appearance and even those of their favorite accessories, their perfectly puffed and coiffed little dogs. Julia, however, had found French women to be beautiful, friendly, and engaging. Larry insisted that he saw none of this, but it didn’t remove the unease Julia felt each time he left. She had come to accept it as her only real insecurity. “The shopping sounds lovely, but I really want to stay home.” She ran a hand through short, spiky brown hair. I need a new coat of paint, she thought to herself. She had seen bits of silver at her temples again, and her trips to the hairdresser had increased in their frequency. “But what’s up?”

“Arthur wants me to look at some apartments over there. We’re over there so often that he thinks we’ll save money on hotels. Plus, it gives us more of a presence there. I’m not so sure I want to deal with Parisian bureaucracy, but I’m a good foot soldier, you know.” He sat next to her and took her hand.

“That you are, my love.” She had met Larry in college and knew right away he was a go-getter, but she hadn’t imagined a life of travel and every luxury, from a spacious home filled with art to servants at her beck and call, a life where she was willing to turn down a trip to Paris because she had been there so many times.

“I’ll miss you,” he said. He sat next to her and stroked her arm. “I have a little time before I head to the airport. How about giving me a special good-bye?”

“Larry, you are such a bad boy,” she said, laughing, and crawled onto his lap. She buried herself in their embrace, knowing that their servant Luisa had headed off just a few minutes before to the store, so they would have time. She gave his ear a little nibble and said, “How about right here?”

“Sounds good to me,” he said, and they made their way to the floor without letting go of each other. In the heat of early summer, the tiled floor felt cool. Their bodies danced together as those of a long-married couple who know everything about what gives each other pleasure. Julia didn’t know if that was good or bad; sometimes, as now, it felt a little mechanical, as though Larry’s mind was somewhere else. Still, she felt close to him in these moments, and contentment flooded her, leaving her warm and soothed. She nestled in his arms, and they spent a few more minutes murmuring their love. Then he shifted to face her, running a hand through her hair and kissing her forehead. “By the way, have you thought any more about the Belize thing?”

The “thing,” as they called it, was his offer to buy them a place along the coast of Belize. Larry’s firm handled a lot of commercial real estate there, so he had suggested they find a nice second home. “Mmm,” she said, her eyes almost closed. She imagined the sun and surf as she lay on a lounge chair, soaking up tropical rays. Surprisingly, she felt…nothing. “I don’t know. Larry, it sounds wonderful, but so does staying home. I don’t know if I can keep up with all this running around.”

He laughed, flashing the boyish grin that still melted her after all these years. “Crazy, isn’t it? But exciting though. Think about it. Remember when we stayed at the Four Seasons? Remember the water, how turquoise it is?”

“Oh, yes, beautiful,” she said, not wanting to let go of her afterglow. To her, Belize meant massages and seafood salad lunches with the other wives, giving Julia many much-needed opportunities to socialize. She loved the ocean breezes, the beaches, the refreshing seaweed shakes with rum that arrived at her chaise longue with only a glance needed from her. It was tempting.

Still, the word “more” crept into her brain again like a pesky fly. She didn’t even know what that meant, especially since she already had more than most people she knew, and “more” felt selfish and greedy. She had more than anyone she knew; what else could there be? She sensed thoughts and feelings, all jumbled up and trying to come to the surface, but still separate bits and pieces that hadn’t found each other.

“Jules, where did you go?”

His words jarred her back to the present. “Yes, sorry, love, I guess when you mentioned Belize I started thinking. You know, I saw an ad for a Spanish class, and I’m thinking about taking it. It would probably help if we decided to get a place there.”

“You don’t need to take Spanish. Wherever we go, everyone knows ‘Visa’ and ‘MasterCard.’”

“I know. But I might want to. You know, just to talk to people in their own language. It might be nice.” She heard his disappointment as clearly as if he had shouted at her. She knew he wanted her to just go along with him, for them to have their adventures together, but in reality, he spent most of their travel time working while she looked around for people to talk to. She had found herself turning down his trips, preferring to stay home, play tennis, and putz around in the rose garden.

“Tell you what, Larry, I’ll think about Belize. Just let me look into this language class.”

“Okay, I can live with that,” he said. “I know it’s hard on you, hanging out while I work, but maybe if we have a place of our own there you could make some long-term friends, not just the tourists passing through. Lord knows you’ve never met a stranger. And you could have two gardens, one in Houston, the other in Belize.”

“That’s true,” she said, laughing.

“I have to go,” he said, gently untangling himself from her. “I may be there for a while this time. You can still change your mind, you know.”

“I know,” she said. She watched as he walked away, his physique still trim and strong. Only his hair, graying and thinner than it once was, broadcast his age. She wondered if she was making a mistake not going. It had never bothered her before to say no, but now, uneasiness wrapped itself around her like a corset. She stood and shook the feeling away. They had a life together that most people only dreamed of, and there was nothing to worry about. Best to go help him finish packing. Then she would sign up for the language class, where she would have something to keep her occupied so she wouldn’t worry so much about nothing.

 

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The Foreign Language of Friends: Ch. 1

September 16, 2011 by admin

Welcome to Friday Fun! Today begins a new “chapter,” so to speak, in this blog as I offer a section of my new novel, now known as The Foreign Language of Friends. I hope you enjoy!

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CHAPTER ONE – OCTOBER 23

The kayaks glided in colorful formation along the shore of Costa Rica’s Nicoya Peninsula, headed from the coast’s safety toward the open water. It was a quiet morning, with only a few tourist groups exploring. The occasional fishing boat punctuated the stillness. Four women paddled and steered, their faces tense with concentration, as their guide called out instructions. For most of the women, it was their first visit to Costa Rica; for all, their first kayaking experience.

Roberto had assured them that he would keep them safe on their trip. Small and compact, with trim, muscled arms, he had soothed their nervousness. “I’ve guided many people over the years,” he said, “and I haven’t lost anyone yet.” With his warm, friendly smile and easygoing manner, they had relaxed, at least until now.

In the quiet waters of the Gulf, they had seen starfish, purple and golden, scattered serenely where land met water. Eagles flew overhead, and iguanas scampered up and down trees. At one point, even a raccoon popped up his head with a questioning look as the kayakers glided by.

So far the morning trek had been peaceful, but to get to remote Cabo Blanco at the peninsula’s southern tip, and to fulfill the promise of spectacular views of wildlife, they would need to navigate rougher waters as the briny gulf swirled and mixed with the Pacific. Roberto motioned for the women to stop. “We can take a break here where the waters are calm,” he said. “The last stretch will take some work.”

They brought their kayaks to a stop and looked around. Rocking with deeper swells, the women rested and pondered the next test of their new skills. The brochures had said they needed experience to get to this point. Roberto, however, had said “No problem.” He had fitted each of them with a safety vest and made them practice undoing the kayak’s skirt. He had them overturn their kayaks in the water, using their paddles to bring them upright again.

After a brief rest, Roberto assessed their enthusiasm. “Ready, ladies?”

“We’re ready,” Mickey called out. The others, less certain, stayed quiet.

“You don’t sound convincing,” Roberto said. “You all seem pretty capable, or I would stop, but we don’t have to go further if you don’t feel ready. You can always take a guide boat to Cabo Blanco.” His voice, with lightly accented English, comforted and soothed as he gave the women the option to stay in quiet waters.

“I’m in.” Ellen spoke in a small voice, her face twitching with apprehension.

“Julia? Claire?” Roberto asked.

They looked at each other, then nodded.

“Okay, then,” he said, “Let’s get moving.” He started to paddle, moving out slowly and just slightly ahead of the group, displaying caramel-colored, muscled arms. Mickey kept up with him, her electric blue kayak in sharp contrast with his red one. Julia in yellow and Ellen in green followed just behind them, with Claire in gleaming white bringing up the rear.

They paddled toward the open waters, wilder than those protected by the Nicoya Peninsula, feeling the kayaks pitch and rock.

“Are you all right?” Roberto called out to Julia. As Julia floated aimlessly over the waves, allowing her kayak to be jostled to and fro, Roberto called, “Keep moving your paddles, ladies. They’ll keep the kayaks stable.”

“Okay, I’m okay,” said Julia, though her voice quivered. With her skin tanned and arms strong from near-daily tennis at the club, Julia could hold her own in the water as long as she kept her nerve. She set her jaw and narrowed her eyes, then regrouped and returned to determined paddling.

Ellen followed closely behind Julia, her thick brown hair tucked under a baseball cap, her neck smeared with fresh sunblock. One can’t be too careful, she had advised her friends. “This was your brilliant idea, Jules!” She had to force herself to yell above the sound of the waves. “Next time, we lie out on the beach and have martinis, okay?”

“You had to remind me, didn’t you! When did you start drinking, anyway?”

“Just now!”

Julia grinned then, though she continued to tremble and strain with each movement, digging in as the current grew stronger. The swells rocked and shook the kayak as increasingly deeper waters coming from the Gulf swirled and mixed with those from the sea, and she pursed her lips. Local kayakers lived for the lively action of the waters, but Julia, a tourist, shook with fear. Roberto had watched the movement of the water and decided that their journey would be easier if they moved further from shore. Julia, who had been comforted knowing that terra firma was nearby, grew more nervous with their increased distance from the beach. You’re not that far away, she assured herself, but it didn’t help.

“Are you sure you’re okay, Julia?” Roberto asked again. “You look a little green.”

“I’m a bit seasick,” Julia confessed.

“Well, hang in there,” he said. “You’re doing great. Just keep going.”

Mickey, the strongest and most athletic of the group, a tangle of arms and legs, led the way. Her youthful toned arms moved the paddle easily through the water. “You’re fine, you’re safe,” she called out. “We’re almost there.”

Claire brought up the rear, silent, her steel-gray hair, normally drawn back in a chignon with nary a strand out of place, now defied her pins and sprays, with wisps undone. Still, she sat like a queen in her yellow kayak, the lean, elegant lines of her back erect, maneuvering her paddle with the same efficiency she had dispatched for years as a corporate lawyer.

They were at the end of the world where, if swept out to sea, they would find nothing but water. The Pacific roared with unrelenting intensity.

Only a few motorboats competed with them, and the group fought against their wakes, amazed at how even a smaller boat affected them, hundreds of yards away, and the rocking of the ocean. Waves crashed against them, the tourmaline waters bursting into white spray. Mickey, still in the lead, tried to point at what she saw ahead, but quickly returned her paddle to the water to steady herself. “Oh, my God! Look at that! Dolphin, I think? Roberto? Is that right?”

“Sure is,” he called out. “Plenty of them out here. Let’s try to get a little closer to them for a better view. Come on, everyone, keep paddling. It will help you stay stable in the water. It gets calmer once we’re through this part, I promise!”

Ellen and Julia struggled more than the others, Ellen from weak arm muscles and Julia, from fear and nausea.

No one ever worried about Claire, who lingered behind the other women. Though she was still within shouting distance of Roberto, she had fallen farther back. Even Roberto had learned during their short acquaintance that Claire Malone was a force of nature all her own, who could scare off even the tide if she wanted to.

When she screamed, , they all stopped in collective shock. True to Claire, her scream made a mighty sound, deep, rich, almost masculine. The group looked to see that her kayak had overturned, leaving a silent, white streak in the water. Despite the lesson, her friends and Roberto watched in disbelief, waiting for Claire to right the boat with her paddle.

“Keep paddling,” Roberto yelled to the other women. He had already turned around, paddling against the current, and would reach Claire’s kayak in a matter of seconds. “You’re fine, just get over to the shore. I’ll help her.” Julia, Ellen, and Mickey headed toward the rocky beach, their movements more tentative with less strength and experience. They didn’t have far to go, perhaps fifty feet, but in that moment, the shore seemed miles away. Each woman cast worried glances over her shoulder, seeking a glimpse of her friend, and the lack of concentration caused them to begin to drift further downstream.

 

“Get to the shore!” Roberto shouted again. “You’re almost there! Trust me, I’ll get Claire.”

The three women paddled even harder, not looking and not wanting to look. When they reached the shore, they aimed the fronts of their boats toward the beach as Roberto had instructed them to. No longer interested in the wildlife, they focused only on the drama behind them. Roberto had reached Claire’s capsized kayak quickly, and turned it over. No Claire. He called for help on his radio, then dived into the frigid waters over and over, looking for her.

“This can’t be happening,” Julia said. “What’s going on? I can’t look.”

Mickey, who felt more comfortable maneuvering her kayak, turned it around to see. “Nothing yet. Here comes a rescue boat. She was wearing a vest, so she should be here somewhere.”

“That won’t help her if something is holding her underwater,” Ellen said. “I’m scared. What if we killed her?”

“Don’t think that way,” Julia said. “Look at all we’ve been through together. We can’t lose her now. She’ll be okay. She has to be!”

“I want to go look for her,” Mickey said. “I feel like this is all my fault. I pushed for this. What an idiot I am. God is punishing me for being so awful.”

“Don’t say that,” Julia said. “That doesn’t help us.”

Mickey still hesitated, staring out at the rescue effort now in full swing. “I still should go. I can help.”

“We can’t have you going out there and getting yourself hurt or killed,” Julia said. “I can’t imagine losing one of us, let alone two.”

“Fine.” Mickey fiddled with her ponytail, undoing and redoing it several times, still staring off into the distance, waiting and waiting. Time froze, with each minute feeling like a lifetime. A rescue boat had arrived to assist Roberto, and they watched as two other men joined him diving into the water, their heads bobbing as they came up for air. “This can’t be happening,” Julia said again. “It’s just too much.”

“She’ll be fine,” Ellen said. “She has to.”

Only Mickey said nothing, waiting and watching, praying for her friend Claire Malone, the most unlikely ally a young woman could ever have.

 

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